In this post, I will be reviewing the work of my peers.
Joshua Smith's Review
Rigo Avila's Review
Friday, May 6, 2016
Open Post to Peer Reviewers
In this post, I will be showing you my draft.
I would like my peer reviewers to keep in mind that this is a draft and that I will be editing it further, I would prefer editing comments be made on the content of what I say and not about anything I should edit to make it flow more smoothly because I plan to do that already.
One weakness in my draft is that it is pretty long, I think that what I said is important so I am not sure how to make it shorter.
One strength of my draft is that it goes into good detail about how I felt about this course and reflects on how I have grown from it.
I would like my peer reviewers to keep in mind that this is a draft and that I will be editing it further, I would prefer editing comments be made on the content of what I say and not about anything I should edit to make it flow more smoothly because I plan to do that already.
One weakness in my draft is that it is pretty long, I think that what I said is important so I am not sure how to make it shorter.
One strength of my draft is that it goes into good detail about how I felt about this course and reflects on how I have grown from it.
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